My Fervent Fire

by Aryaan   May 15, 2008


I'll steal the thunder from your eyes
I'll drink love from your luscious lips
I'll show my passion under the open sky
Inject my feelings to you so very deep

I don't care who is watching
I don't fear who is on guard
I'm so bold and I'm searching
Ardour of my love in your placid heart

So come and dance with me
With the rhythm of endless time
Love me with your all fantasies
Hold me tight like a vice crime

I'll break all the doors of your mind
I'll let you fly in your eros and desire
I'll make you crazy make you blind
Just burn once in my fervent fire

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Reminds me of a Doors song, ha. I like the language you used in this poem, very nice choice of words. My favorite line has to be "I'll let you fly in your eros and desire," almost a surreal language of love, like one that can only be fully understood by you but appreciated by the reader. The only thing I will say is to switch, Your and all in line 11. Simple mistake. I enjoyed this one very much

  • 16 years ago

    by LadzOfSoul

    Great poem.... I enjoy reading this one.... and you pick the finest line to fit the emotion... love it...

  • 16 years ago

    by gracey grey

    I have read a few love poems here, but nothing can compare to your "Fervent Fire".Full of passion and intensity this poem has.And I absolutely love every word of every line.I wish I had written this.
    Looking forward to reading more...keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    Intense poem ..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Very big vocab....I liked this one a lot. I look foward to reading more of yours...oh and I think you should add more to this!

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