A very nicely written poem...... i like the words u have used...... excellent piece of work

Great job on this piece. The imagery is awesome. What a picture you have painted for the mind.

I'll break all the doors of your mind
I'll let you fly in your eros and desire
I'll make you crazy make you blind
Just burn once in my fervent fire

This was my favorite of your stanzas. Everyone should fly free in their love.
Take Care Cindy

Very big vocab....I liked this one a lot. I look foward to reading more of yours...oh and I think you should add more to this!

Intense poem ..5/5

I have read a few love poems here, but nothing can compare to your "Fervent Fire".Full of passion and intensity this poem has.And I absolutely love every word of every line.I wish I had written this.
Looking forward to reading more...keep writing.

Great poem.... I enjoy reading this one.... and you pick the finest line to fit the emotion... love it...

Reminds me of a Doors song, ha. I like the language you used in this poem, very nice choice of words. My favorite line has to be "I'll let you fly in your eros and desire," almost a surreal language of love, like one that can only be fully understood by you but appreciated by the reader. The only thing I will say is to switch, Your and all in line 11. Simple mistake. I enjoyed this one very much