Comments : Broke and broken

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Excellent work well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Matt

    I think that's a lazy response. I think if you really like something that someone writes you should at least give them 5 extra words depicting exactly what was exceptional about it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This was so personal and honest which is always great to read! well done and I really hope that things start looking up to you. I really enjoyed reading this as my 1 brother was like this at a stage but then he decided 2 change is life around! take care and keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Utter rubbish...... nah I'll give you a five anyway, most of the poems on here you cant remember several seconds after you read them. Thankfully this was worth the look.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Good Poem actually it's the best cause u really expressed dem feelings out and it was str8 forward..hope to god ur life gets better..i know mine never did..hope urs does..
    -Kelly ;;