Please Don't

WAW ITS BEAUTIFUL POEM
even i feel so sad as i got the same feeling and it always got her way to go out,its hard to forget,sometimes its hard to understand why this happend, you did a good jop and you words get power to each line,keep in that good jop 5/5

Well written...very emotional poem...
but there are places where the flow was off..

overall a nice write.. the emotions that you tried to display could easily be felt by the reader...

keep writing..

This poem is really deep. I love it, it's a lot like the things i've gone through. I love these lines in the 3rd stanza

please don't say
we met just to depart
how do I make my heart understand

it's so true. no one can make their heart understand when someone leaves you. i love it, 5/5

Sad poem, understand what you're feeling,
the word ain't threw it off a little, but that's okay
it was a good poem :]

The flow was good and the message nice and clear. The only thing that bugs me is that "I" is capitolized only once.

"true that you were just a dream of distant land
its difficult to mold this broken heart."
^^^ I love the way that you close your poem. These lines are beautiful. A well deserved 5/5.
~Stefanie