by iloveyouandrew May 15, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
When I first met you |
by A F
Nicely done. |
Im glad i read this one. =] |
by Rachel RTVW
Too many I's and filler words. Lacks structure and flow. Not deserving of the front page. |
It was an amazing piece I understood what you meant on the last few alst, very impacting. |
by meli
Wowo dat was a beautiful poem..i think u did a great job. the way u said it was amazing n sometime's some of us lose the ones we love..=] but other then dat great job.. |