These thing I bare

by xXxRaulXxx   May 15, 2008


All these things I bare.
The pain of these all is one which can't be dealt.
The suffering of these all is with which can't be controlled.
The ease of pain is but a dream the need of love is just but a fantasy.

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Simple,and short, but has so much depth

    need of love is just but a fantasy.
    --fav. part
    loved it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    That was great! so much is spoken in just little words. the last line is wat stood out the most 4 me. very well written. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by homebound

    Short, but powerful
    I love the last line:
    "The ease of pain is but a dream the need of love is just but a fantasy."
    That is a true answer for me most of the time! Great job! hope to read more!

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