Comments : What If??

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great work xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ash

    A simple yet expressive poem formed solely by tow words: "What if?"
    Excellent work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    If you died i wuold got to hell to pull you out
    if you never loved me again i would wait in the dark and watch over you like the angel i am,

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    If you died i wuold got to hell to pull you out
    if you never loved me again i would wait in the dark and watch over you like the angel i am,
    if you were pregnit it would be mine i would be the father and your lover,
    even if the world fell apart i would try i would try

  • 16 years ago

    by Please hold me tight so I know you will never leave

    Thank you to you all. My poems come from heart and i tack your comments to my heart so thank you.