Comments : I still love you

  • 16 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohh this is so sad. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this.

    I loved this poem, although there's a few grammatical errors you should hurry & correct to make this poem even better!

    thouse--> those
    there--> their
    off--> of

    Other than that, it's perfect the way it is. Great job! :]