Thats good the layout worked well ont his piece x

:O
This is the best suicide poem I have read in a long time.
To me:
Punctuation is perfect.
Rhyming is perfect.
The feeling is strong and raw.
I love it...

100/5 (If that was possible)
~FountainsOfBlood

Wow.
this piece is so strong and powerful.
and i love it.
.5/5.

great job&&keep it up.
much love,
mac.<3
[.just.another.silly.teenage.girl.]