Line 3 "too"
Line 13 "you get too close"
Last line "too"
You're muddling your to and too's up :) hehe.

Anyway.
This poem is so touching, even though the story that lies behind it is awful. I love the use of contrast:
"You drink to forget so you don't have to remember"
Very strong writing

5/5
~FountainsOfBlood

Thats brilliant work, well done hope you write more x