Cristaline water (Triple Haiku)

by AlexBlythe   May 16, 2008


My cristaline sea
And my vermilion water
A magical place

Mix it together
To have a combination
Of reddish thick blood

Cristaline water
Red as the sky and my soul
On my own mettle

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  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    The last stanza was really great, but I didn't like the second one very much. Haikus are hard to write, though, so congrats. on being able to do that.

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