Wow! I am utterly fascinated by entire piece, though if this is, which is, a metaphor for love than I think that you should put it in that section, most nature poems actually don't have meaning deep as this. And you idea for a poem is fantastic, truly refreshing. I think that you put a lot of beauty into each line, I like ending a lot.
Greatly done, I enjoyed in this poem, the thing that impressed me most is that you managed to truly say a lot through such short piece.

How these are really beautiful lines... nice word choice...

'Anything to color the buds a different coat of red.
(No one wants a blossom dressed in blood)'

^^ these lines r so well written..

great write..

keep writing..

The vocabulary in this piece was wonderful. Great word choice. :] Ummm... Again.. I'm speechless. There really isn't much to say. This poem was unique I thought. because, like you stated.. We probably interpreted it differently. :] I like it. 5/5

Loved the title...it was a poem in itself :]

I adored the symbolism! You expressed it so nicely and even without he writers notes it was clearly easy to understand because you wrote it so beautifully. Love is as fragile as a flower but just because it withers doesn't mean it can't bloom again, you just need to know the special care it needs for it to bloom. This was different from the other pieces I've read by you which was great because it shows how diverse you are as a poet. Nicely done my dear *5/5*