Another stupid depressing poem, letting all my feelings go

by alim   May 16, 2008


Her smile was beautiful
her tears were real
she cut deep into her skin
she didn't want to feel.
the things they said
the lies they told
these are the memories
for her to have to hold
scars from the nights
that were to rough to bear
the insane thoughts of wanting to die
shouldn't someone be there?

she can't take it
she can't fake it

someone save her

she's not going to make it.

-alexandruh

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  • 16 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    I liked it all the way up to the she cant take it she cant take it till the end. that just ruined it for me. everything up until that was really really good. it was really really good though. really good :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    That is a really good poem!! i really liked it and i no how it feels...5/5