Spiraling maelstorm

by dante   May 16, 2008


The surreal madness of life swallows me
While it’s brutal pain overwhelms me
Why must this body tie me to life
Let me cast off this material shell and delve into the death nexus

Let me cast off this animated oblivion constraining me
A snake to slowly kill and feed
Let the snake taste my heart of ice and stone
Let me rob it of its supper and cast life off as a shaded and fallen angel

in an apocalyptic maelstrom
A maelstrom of my own emotion
Drowning my in an endless spiral of numbing bliss and in my dream world
Ending my life of agony

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    "Drowning my in an endless spiral"
    ^missing word?

    I really like this write and your description, I think you have done a really nice job with this piece of work.

    The beginning was may favorite part, it really drew you in and kept you reading. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great work, good skills well done xx

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