Comments : Spiraling maelstorm

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great work, good skills well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    "Drowning my in an endless spiral"
    ^missing word?

    I really like this write and your description, I think you have done a really nice job with this piece of work.

    The beginning was may favorite part, it really drew you in and kept you reading. Great job.