by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion May 16, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Its in all the sanctuaries |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats very powerful work, i liked it as you keot the readers attention ell and each stanza was strong on its own you didnt have patchesof good and bad ones, it flowed at a nice steady pace which made it more enjoyable to read and just made an excellent poem, well done keep it up xxx |