by Twisted Heart May 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Here lies this heart a broken shell |
by debbylyn
Great Lento! Beautifully crafted as always! Love the title and the rhyming and flow are both excellent. |
by Marwa
This is so sweet am luvin this so much!!! |
by Cindy
Great job Jeannie..Welcome back :) |
by Ingrid
Wow...such a sad poem. Somehow the formed poetry seems to enhance the feeling underneath. Very good job on the form! |
This poem was wonderful! I see how hard this type of poem can be to write but you did it so well. I love the idea of a blue heart. 5/5 |