She knows this is it

by XxJessicaxX   May 16, 2008


She tries to push the people away that are trying to help
her.

She knows what they want her to do, but once she refuses.

She walks away and knows this is it, they are chasing her trying to calm her down, telling her everything is going to be alright.

She knows there lieing and refuses to believe them.

She knows this time they won't be able to stop her, she
turns around and they are gone.

She's so angry and in so much pain, she need to relief it all and make it go away.

She goes to the beach where she knows she's safe, she looks around there's no-one there, the beach is deserted.

She takes the glass and starts slashing, She can't stop, she sees the blood dripping everywhere.

She hears a voice from the distance calling her name and telling her to stop, leave me alone let me go this is what i really want.

Know you don't you have so much ahead of you, once again she says everything is going to be OK.

Know it's not it never is, walk away and let me go, she starts slashing again going deeper and deeper by the second.

She has so much Adrenalin pumping through her body, she knows this is it.

It's going to be all over soon enough, She says it's time to let go, she says please don't.

Her very last words where this is what i want. My wish at last has come true.

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  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Spelling:
    Stanza 4 - "Lying"
    Stanza 12 - "Adrenaline"

    For Stanza's 10 and 11 I think you have put the wrong word at the front of each line cause it doesn't sound right :S if that makes sense. I think they both should be changed to "No"

    Overall, the beginning is very strong which leads into a very brilliant poem

    Keep it up
    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood