You last line reminded me of a song called The Sun Does Like You.

and young lady don't stay up too long

You DO shine, gabby, you need to see that

great poem

You shine as lovely and as beautiful as two of the fairest stars of all the heavens, even if I don't quite know you as well as I'd like, but through your poetry, much is revealed... and that is honesty and vividness, beauty and intelligence and much, much more. :)

Keep a safe eye out, most people don't reveal the truth because they're afraid of your reaction. :)

5/5