Kept Infidelity

by A F   May 16, 2008


Date written: May 15, 2oo8

Been tossing && turning in my bed
Trying to clear the shits out of my head.
I have to get them out to keep my sanity;
Now I gotta tell you about my kept infidelity.

It's hard because I don't know where to start
I'm just afraid that I could break your heart.
&& afraid for the fact that I wouldn't know what to do..
If eventually... I would lose you.

You && I were meant to be together.
We even talked about how we're gonna be forever.
This will pass-- Let's keep that in mind,
But please don't leave everything we've had behind.

I will never give up on you;
I hope you'll never give up on me too.
You know we love each other so much
&& I would hate it if we choose to stay out of touch.

I'm sorry if I've done this.
I wish everything would go back to normal with one kiss.
But I gotta take the blame for what I've done,
Because I don't wanna wake up one day && you're far away gone.

Let me tell you I love you once more;
Because in my heart that's one thing for sure.
&& if you still can't perceive how much sorry I really am in this melody,
I 'd make another one just so you would finally forgive me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This would make me want to forgive you ..

    nicely written in a contemporary style

  • 15 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    Good poetry, Good to see younger people like us producing deeper and more interesting poetry day by day, sadly I can't keep fequently posting.

    "trying to clear the shits out of my head" good to see abit of rage haha.

    Dean.xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Kylie Jo

    Shoottt sorry. messed up... hahah <33 love it tho

  • 15 years ago

    by Kylie Jo

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Good word choice and emotions in this poem, I enjoyed it a lot.

    "Because I don't wanna wake up oneday && you're far away gone."

    There should be a space between "oneday", and the second part of that line doesn't make much sense to me. Maybe reword it to this:

    "Because I don't wanna wake up one day and find you're far gone."

    Also, I noticed in your poem for "and" you wrote &&, and in my opinion its easier to read if you just wrote "and", plus its proper grammer.

    But otherwise than that, I liked this, very heartfelt. Keep writing, always and forever....

    Let me tell you I love you once more;
    Because in my heart that's one thing for sure.
    && if you still can't perceive how much sorry I really am in this melody,
    I 'd make another one just so you would finally forgive me.

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