Comments : Weavers Of finest China Silk (Poem form: Basic Pantoum)

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Amazing write, Karan. :) Beautiful imagery, marvelous vocabulary. It was fantastic, so to say.

    5/5

    By the by, thank you for the comments. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Finally some one explaining to people the different ways to write a poem. ty.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Angels storm with beauty, to many unknown
    Where stars shine down through perpetual haze
    Bards sing melancholy for mermaids adorn,
    Meadows, where Unicorns and Pegasus graze

    Wow...Karan...this sure is beautiful! You words paint such a dreamy picture for the readers eye. I truly loved reading it!
    My fav list is full, but I will add this poem to my favorite poems, so I can keep track of you:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Another enjoyable read. I like your choice of words and the pictures you draw with words...beautifully penned!