Suicide returns

by Baby Rainbow   May 16, 2008


Too much pain thats kept inside
all these feelings i have to hide
all these thoughts i continue to find
crashing about and damaging my mind

depression so strong its winning again
knowing I'm too weak to fight the pain
i can feel them now begin to burn
the suicidal thoughts now return

i think its time for me to leave
happiness is too hard to believe
everything i touch gets taken away
people i love are hurting everyday

I'm sorry that I'm leaving you
but what else can i do?
if i love you then you will know
if you love me then let me go

saffie
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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    This is really sad but I know how you feel. Well written, full of emotion. 5/5. Em

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    AMAZING!!!!!! that was... I'm blown away by your use of words the format and the emotion. the entire poem was a gripping read and when i think ive found my favourite part i just find another and then i cant decide. amazing. 1000/5 ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by idiot izuki

    WOW THIS ONE IS SOOO STRONG ON ME...
    I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE OUT OF ALL MINES..
    SOO DOES THIS POEM HAVE A BIG AFFECT
    ON YOU OR ANYTHING?
    BECAUSE IT'S REALLY DEEP AND TOUCHING.
    YOU ARE WAY MUCH BETTER THAN I AM...
    MAKES ME JEALOUS AND WANNA START MY
    WRITING AGAIN BUT I GUESS I'M GETTING
    TO LAZY AT THAT BECAUSE I HAVE NO TIME.
    BUT YOU KNOW YOU SHOULD KEEP IT UP...
    I REALLY APPRICIATED ALL THE SUPPORT
    AND COMMENTS THAT YOU HAVE GIVEN ME..
    AND NOW IT'S MY TURN TO REPAY THEM
    ALL BACK TO YOU..
    NOW IT'S MY TURN TO HELP YOU UP YOUR
    FEET.. IF THERE'S ANYTHING THAT I CAN
    HELP YOU WITH JUST HIT ME UP...
    I'VE GIVEN UP THE WRITING AND YOU HAVE
    CONTINUED IT I'M GLAD..
    AIGHT TAKE CARE AND KEEP IN TOUCH...
    HERE'S MY EMAIL ADDRESS...

    idiot_izuki09@hotmail.com

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Wow, I can totally relate.
    "everything i touch gets taken away"
    Ughhhh.

  • 16 years ago

    by sirusthevirus

    Its how i feel everyday but a smile on my face says other wise..

    keep on writing

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