A very good poem with a well felt meaning. a few spelling mistakes - in the 6th stanza i think you meant 'loud' not lout', 8th stanza - i think you meant 'are' not 'our' and 'then' not 'than', last stanza it should be 'behind' not 'be-hide'

sorry to be so picky but this is a really good poem and these spellings being corrected would make it even better

suicidal love xx