My Beloved Nephew

by Diamondz   May 16, 2008


Whenever you see me
You have a great smile
And gosh you're about to turn three
Which is not from a while

I know we haven't seen each other
For more than two weeks
Which is really a bother
And also that reeks

Even though you are my nephew
And I know that's true
See in the world, there could be only one of you
And you know that I love you and oh so cute

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Awww......very cute, I can see you really love and care for him! Just some thoughts:

    "And you know that I love you and oh so cute"

    "and oh so cute"- really doesn't fit well for the ending line. It is not a very strong part so maybe try something like this: "And you know that I love you and think you are cute"
    Or whatever else you want.
    When I am reading that line the "and oh so cute" doesn't really make sense there in that line. Otherwise, nice job, and take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Diamondz

    PL3AS3 VOT3 ON THIZ PO3M :)

More Poems By Diamondz