PL3AS3 VOT3 ON THIZ PO3M :)

Awww......very cute, I can see you really love and care for him! Just some thoughts:

"And you know that I love you and oh so cute"

"and oh so cute"- really doesn't fit well for the ending line. It is not a very strong part so maybe try something like this: "And you know that I love you and think you are cute"
Or whatever else you want.
When I am reading that line the "and oh so cute" doesn't really make sense there in that line. Otherwise, nice job, and take care!