Awwww..... i hate seing this, if you are really doing and going through this,.... i dont know, you shouldnt be fealing like this. |
This is a hard hitting poem about a serious eating disorder The merging of the the title with the poem climaxed with the last line for me. You are very skillful at making your point |
by she
You take the scale and throw it |
by eehcuhhhz
Erm... |
by Lonely Rider
Good write...very well described... |
Very powerful write. You created great flow and rhythm in every stanza which made the whole poem even more effective. I like the fact that it seems that you're referring to the person who reads this which left great impression on me. The last line is fantastic conclusion to this piece. |