Can't cry

by Maria   May 16, 2008


I cried today.
The first tear came, and i couldn't stop the rest.
I haven cried in a long time now.
I can't cry, because then i can't stop.
But today all my tears had bottled up for so long,
I couldn't hold them back anymore.
But crying made me weak.
The wall around me fell down with each tear.
So today I promised myself never to cry again.
I know it's good to let your feelings out.
But it hurts to much.
I can't cry.
because if I do, I'm afraid i won't ever stop again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    I think the emotions in this..are very deep, and i love this kind of concept of writing.
    But, to me.. this isn't really a poem. More of a "here is what i am feeling, but in poem form". I really do like the words you use to describe this though. I hope you take no offense to this.

    I will say. I am like this. I cant cry. I am the strong one. If i do cry, i fear i will never stop. PM me if yah wanna talk. I'm a pretty good listener, and i like to meet new people on her.

    Keep on trying. Poetry is such a beautiful thing. If it helps you get your feelings out, then heck with what people think about it. Keep on writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crippled Wing

    Love it! It has so much emotion in it

  • 16 years ago

    by Maria

    Thank you for liking my poem <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Maria

    Thanks :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Cool work well done xx

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