Comments : Can't cry

  • 16 years ago

    by robbie

    Im sorry to hear its so painful to cry
    i cant cry for othher reasons
    people always look to me as the strong one, the one that keeps it together.
    i find my corner and fall apart, this is what im doing here.
    none of my friends ever read this stuff, and thats good.
    dont bottle shit up (sorry, it was just the right word to describe it) it will give you a brain tumor:)
    i say, if you feel like cry, then cry
    cry your eyes out.
    and this is coming from a 23 year old guy that lives alone in italy far from all his family:):):)
    cheer up:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Cool work well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Maria

    Thanks :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Maria

    Thank you for liking my poem <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Crippled Wing

    Love it! It has so much emotion in it

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    I think the emotions in this..are very deep, and i love this kind of concept of writing.
    But, to me.. this isn't really a poem. More of a "here is what i am feeling, but in poem form". I really do like the words you use to describe this though. I hope you take no offense to this.

    I will say. I am like this. I cant cry. I am the strong one. If i do cry, i fear i will never stop. PM me if yah wanna talk. I'm a pretty good listener, and i like to meet new people on her.

    Keep on trying. Poetry is such a beautiful thing. If it helps you get your feelings out, then heck with what people think about it. Keep on writing.