"The spring sun gently warms the earth"

Great opening, I like this beginning line.

"Signaling an awakening from winterâ??s sleep"

I don't think the a??s is supposed to be there, I don't know why it's there, maybe by accident?

"The early showers caress the surface
Filling the needs of life buried deep"

Good usage of words here, and not just saying the same old thing about spring, but kinda of putting it in your own words. It gives the reader a new way to look at spring. Nice job, flow was good, I wish it could be longer but it was so good!

I really liked this, but as a personal opinion i think it needs a little more. maybe an extra stanza or two. but still a really nice write and very descriptive.

Taegan Emily