by Nikkicola May 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Maybe one day I will finally believe myself... |
Excellent write (minus a few errors) but it has feeling and power and can hit home to a lot of people |
by Nikkicola
Thank you, yes sometimes I get so caught up in the excitement of writing that I over look errors in my writings. |
by Dave
Wow that was great, I can truely relate because I know my girlfriend will be feeling that way soon |
I <3 it! but just a tip... on the second line no one needs a space in between instead of noone. and where it says "are love was put on hold" it should be "our love" instead of "are love". |
Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5 |