Comments : Keep Wishing

  • 16 years ago

    by ForeverASickKid

    Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by XxTwisteDxxMinDxX

    I <3 it! but just a tip... on the second line no one needs a space in between instead of noone. and where it says "are love was put on hold" it should be "our love" instead of "are love".
    but other than that it was perfect. 5/5. =]

  • 13 years ago

    by Dave

    Wow that was great, I can truely relate because I know my girlfriend will be feeling that way soon

  • 12 years ago

    by WanderingShade

    Excellent write (minus a few errors) but it has feeling and power and can hit home to a lot of people

    • 12 years ago

      by Nikkicola

      Thank you, yes sometimes I get so caught up in the excitement of writing that I over look errors in my writings.