Clocks make waiting unkind

by music4pumpkins   May 17, 2008


If clocks have hands
do they have minds
controlling time
making waiting unkind

is that why waiting for
you takes so long
even before you
waiting seemed wrong

this sort of time
i'm feeling is new
hard and impatient
just like thoughts of you

now i am confused
with you on my mind
my how time flys
like it has something to find

ever why i like you
like time, it's a point of view

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  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Interesting way to look at waiting for someone

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I dont understand the last stanza
    but it has a unique point of view behind it
    and flows pretty well
    =) 4/5