Song of the Scared ((I can't breathe, do You care?))

by StandStill   May 17, 2008


Just give me one good reason,
God, give me something to believe in
God, I need to know You're here with me,
Need to know I'm better than this sin

Lord, do You hear me?
And, Lord, are You there?
Lord, do You see me?
Lord, do You care?
Do You care?

I need to feel Your arms around me,
Need to know I'm not alone,
Need to hear the words that I speak,
Need to know I have a home

I know You created everything,
But everything's just now begun,
Please, forgive me for my insignificance
But I feel like an army of one

Lord, do You hear me?
And, Lord, are You there?
Lord, do You see me?
Lord, do You care?
Do You care?

Tiny are the butterflies
as they fly home to the sunset
Tiny are Your little lambs
help us not to forget
to breathe

Just to breathe,
Oh, breathe

Lord, do You hear me?
And, Lord, are You there?
Lord, do You see me?
Lord, do You care?
Do You care?

Do You care?
Do You care that I can't breathe?
Do You care?

Lord, I hope You hear me,
Lord, I hope I can see this sun set,
Lord, do You miss me?
Lord, I just need to breathe,
Oh, breathe,
just breathe

**zomg. i. wrote. a. song. yes, this is an amazing feat for me. lol. it sucks, yes. first songyish thing i've written. like...ever. O.O ums..and this would be far more impressive if 1) i could sing. and 2) i could remember the really simple tune that came with it. BUT! i can't. lol. thanks for reading, guys**

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    :) it's good for a first time, at least. Good job.
    For the first song I ever wrote, people thought I commited plagiarism.
    It's not very often you see a brilliant young writer, but... sometimes people take chances and risks and if those risks and chances come with a price, so be it.

    Beautiful, really. A very good way to start off song writing. :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Yay your first song rocks!!
    great job Gabby!!

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