Yay your first song rocks!!
great job Gabby!!

:) it's good for a first time, at least. Good job.
For the first song I ever wrote, people thought I commited plagiarism.
It's not very often you see a brilliant young writer, but... sometimes people take chances and risks and if those risks and chances come with a price, so be it.

Beautiful, really. A very good way to start off song writing. :) 5/5