Her velvet name

by dante   May 17, 2008


I let out a hoarse groan
My souls deep wounds opening again
At the mere whisper of your velvet name
Or the thought of your quicksilver beauty

That shy and hesitant smile
And that laugh, like a gently flowing brook
The pure ring of serenity and peace
I cannot hear your voice again
I've fallen to far to come back to the light
I let the last of my energy fly forth in a cry
A cry that I make for all eternity
A cry of your name and the love I hold within
And what is that name
What is the name of my beloved�.
Her name....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I really like your opening stanza. You did a good job with the emotion and the rawness of the write, though I was hoping to hear her name at the end lol All in all a nice write.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    I love this poem, raw emotion from the heart...
    It was... Beautiful...
    5/5

    Cheers xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Well... it's a good style of writing. This makes the poem more interesting. Lots of emotions are there and this one is also very intense. very well written.