Comments : You still wanted more

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Really good poem!
    and i like it where you said
    "seemed I could not see"
    i thought it was quite good :)
    5/5 :)!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tears

    How could I have been so blind?
    Thinking that I could be the one on your mind,
    Believing that you could actually love me,
    When she was where you wanted to be.
    **
    Awesome stanza. We often wish for the attention of that special someone. But he'll come, if the one you like is with another, he wasn't meant to be.
    I loved how you worded the poem and how your emotion flowed so freely.