Beautiful, Cindy!
Your poem made me smile from ear to ear, it has such a gentle touch to it:))
Thanks so much for sharing, sweetheart!

Love, Ingrid

Night breeze carries you my love
Bright moonbeams in your hair

what a great start of such a lovely poem, seems as such a tough pattern but still made it look so simple with such smooth flow, only you could do this magic.

Sleeping tucked within your heart
Dreaming safely away from harm

good night my dear, thats how i want you to take rest and sleep.

Loved every inch of this poem.

all the best and take care

Aching for your loving touch
Cradling warmth, embracing arms
Sleeping tucked within your heart
Dreaming safely away from harm
^^^
Cindy ... this part just brings a tear to my eye. It's just so beautifully penned from the heart.
Sleeping tucked within your heart <---- the imagery in this line just melts my heart.

You have done a wonderful piece with this form Cindy. I can't even seem to begin mine ... Well tomorrow is a new day, perhaps a rhyme shall come ... lol

Excellent read as always my friend
Luanne

You did an amazing job writing this Lento. The emotions carried in this piece are very moving. I can feel the longing for your love between the lines! You aced this form! The rhyming is great and the flow perfect! Sweet and romantic....Nicely done....

^Night breeze carries you my love
Bright moonbeams in your hair
Firelight kisses, waiting lips
Unite two souls, answered prayers^

Beautiful imagery in this stanza.

^Aching for your loving touch
Cradling warmth, embracing arms
Sleeping tucked within your heart
Dreaming safely away from harm^

Good flow throughout the piece. Nice way to end it. Grea job on the form!

Looks more like a tutorial. I would lose the description because it makes the reader look at the description more than the poetry in my opinion. I love it though. Great poem.

Cindy,
Dear I am so proud of you and the evolvement from the death perspective. I know this was hard to write and I commend you on a perfect subject and write. You dear are truly growing in each and every write you spill upon pages. I am proud of the fact the genre changed from the waiting death to the love embraced. You have done a fantastic job on the form, I envy the fact you so flawlessly have perfected this. I suppose it's in yalls genes to deliver such beautiful works.
Great Job dear friend. Thank you for sharing.
Love ,
Kay

Such a romantic... poem you have expressed. how good and romantic can be love.. after reading this i can imagine alot...

this poem brought me very far inside me...
this poem brought me the last corner of my heart. where there was a small corner. where i locked my lovely moments that i spend with her.. once again you made all those love memories awake..

i know i should feel happy that i had those memories... but somewhere in my heart there is emtyness. and maybe that was she.

so just want to say you this kind of poem is new for me... i will also try to right a lento.

howp i will write well but im sure i cannot be good as you are..

wonderfull piece of work..
you got 5

Wow, that was beautiful and a style that I'm not familiar with.
It was wonderfully written.

Aww... this is amazing! What a start of the poem.

'Aching for your loving touch
Cradling warmth, embracing arms
Sleeping tucked within your heart
Dreaming safely away from harm'
This stanza is just brilliant! Great poem indeed.