Questions i would ask

by DK   May 17, 2008


Did the birds begin to sing their song
when i saw you that day
had i forgotten to bring along
the pride thats not in play

did you add the drug into your smile
that melted my heart each time
must you deny me all this while
those eyes i hope to rhyme

did i tell you that dress was beautiful
so suited to match your face
too painful to know how sorrowful
in your heart i have no place

have you failed to see each time
i couldn't catch my breath
and does your heart's rhythm climb
whenever I'm to your left

if you ever start to question why
I'm so in love with you
I'd say no matter how i try
I'd still come back to you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nic39uy

    Oh you spelled breath wrong, just wanted to point that out. the poem is still great, just thought you just wanted to know, that's all.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nic39uy

    Very sweet and lovely poem, liked it very much. i've read a lot of poems and yours caught my attention. i can relate to this poem,
    standing next to her and wondering if her heart was beating as fast as mines. like that part very much. keep up the good work.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Loveliest poem in d chain of most loveliest poems...

    It was really amazing,

    Keep it up,

    best wishes..

    karan