A Father's Heart
by H E Losey May 17, 2008
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Larger than the universe, yet |
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16 years ago
That's cool, I like the message you are giving out. I thought it was neat with the yet's, very different, but in a good way. Another excellent write, you had a short amount of words, but you put everything needed in it. Take care!
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16 years ago
by Deana
A lot of message in a short amount of words.Excellent write.I liked the way it kind of continued on just by the word "yet".
