Comments : A Father's Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    A lot of message in a short amount of words.Excellent write.I liked the way it kind of continued on just by the word "yet".

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    That's cool, I like the message you are giving out. I thought it was neat with the yet's, very different, but in a good way. Another excellent write, you had a short amount of words, but you put everything needed in it. Take care!