by Michael D Nalley May 17, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Does darkness exist, it certainly does |
by East Poetry
Darkness....infinite nothingness |
This is very good as well, and has great emotion. However the rhyming of romance and balance is a little shakey but it works as slant rhyming and doesn't ruin the piece. Also the meter was a little off now and then but it was still a very good piece. 4/5 i enjoyed reading this piece |
by ECILA ice
Wow very well written. you brought up the hope despite the obstacle that every indidual pass through, and on how you try to point out that balance is not merely a word but it really exist.. |
by Kitten
I really enjoyed it i like your rhyme sceam i liked the last line as i was reading it i kept thinking oh this dosnt work but then as i read on it all fit together so perfectly |
This was an okay piece. I felt though, that a lot of this poem was missing something, or perhaps it had too much of something. Sorry I can be more specific. |