FORGIVENESS

by xXxRaulXxx   May 17, 2008


If you try to reach inside of your heart
you can find forgiveness, or at least the start
And from that place where you can forgive
is where Hope, and Love, also thrive and live

And with each step that you try to take
and with that chance that your heart might break
Comes so much happiness, and so much strength
which Alone can carry you a fantastic length

For hate and anger will not get you there
and though you say that you just don't care
You can EASILY avoid the pain on which hate feeds
. . . the kind of hurt that No one needs

Just make the move, take that first stride
let go of the thing known as "Foolish Pride"
Maybe then you can start to repair the past
into something strong, that will mend, and last!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was fanstatic.
    an amazing write, loved every word. and a wonderful flow.
    keep up the nice work!!

  • 16 years ago

    by dancingwolf

    I love this one its very cool i love how u word it too good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by homebound

    Very powerful! i loved it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    I agree with a bleeding mess, this had a wonderful message and flow to it. you're very talented. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    The flow was great, the message was so powerful, i give a 5/5

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