This is really awsome!

The flow was great, the message was so powerful, i give a 5/5

I agree with a bleeding mess, this had a wonderful message and flow to it. you're very talented. :]

Very powerful! i loved it!!!!

I love this one its very cool i love how u word it too good job!

Wow this was fanstatic.
an amazing write, loved every word. and a wonderful flow.
keep up the nice work!!