Love stinks ((and other realistic sayings))

by StandStill   May 17, 2008


Lovesick is an understatement
when you can't feel your heartbeat
yes, heartbreak doesn't matter,
when he's knocked you off your feet

The problem with falling head over heels
when nobody wants to catch you,
is that more often than not, you land too hard,
and there's nothing you can do

What happens when your breath is taken,
but he doesn't want to give it back?
your poor heart needs oxygen,
silent death by terrible lack

You swear you would die for him,
in fact, it's far too late,
you gave him your heart and he broke it,
you died silently for love's sake

"I want to hold your hand"
seems to always ring too true,
but hands remain e'er so cold,
simply because he doesn't really want you

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  • 16 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Wow. that was amazing. I loved it.
    it flowed well and had a PERFECT msg *stupid exboyfriends*
    Im gonna put it in my fave poems list.
    great job Gabbykins!
    ILY!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    I really like this poem
    i think it was cool how u put a twist to common sayings 4.5/5
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    If he doesnt want you, you deserve better
    good poem

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