This is amazing, i really enjoyed it! and yes i appreciate your comments im glad there's someone who can relate. i havent went to see my brother's grave in over a year, and i feel asahmed. but in other words keep up the good work!

This is soo sad!!!
im sure it was hard to go, but you shouldnt blame ur self...
erica is watchin over you...
no dought about that
you write really good poems!
i like...
keep it up

Oh so sad...ur poem is really wonderful...keep it up..

This is such a beautiful poem and I know that it couldn't of been easy on you to write this but I am sure that Erica is looking down on you and appreciates it very much! I know its hard but you have just got to hang in there and stay strong, its okay to let your emotions be seen! take care!!!

Oh i am sorry. its a great poem and i know you must be in so much pain. but thank you for your comments. and im glad we can relate to each other

Amazing poem.
This one is really close to home.
It touched my heart.
Thank you for sharing this.

Sincerly, Sammie-Lee.

5/5, by the way.

Tammi, your poem is so touching coz it touches everyone's life especially at the time of losing a loved ones.
I felt your pain in the sense that I already lost my mother and afraid again of losing my son, anytime. It's so painful and hard to face this situation and acceptance takes a very long period of time. However, we must face reality...that our life here in earth is just temporary and we have no choice but to accept HIS will being our Creator.
Truly, your child is your angel forever...loving, caring and watching you always.
I hope you can also read my poem, "offering" dedicated to my son with CHD.

Wow, great poem. Im sorry for what happen, anything I can do please tell me ^^ 5/5

Wow.....that got to me..... i loved it so much...

"there are monsters tearing at my flesh" [something like that]

idk i really like that part [lol] but in the end ur poem touched me.....i really love it it's amazing ur words are inspiring

Beautiful.. shivers.. stay strong <3

So very touching and sad. Death is so unfair sometimes. BUt you are an amazing writer. Great job.

victoria