Five Months

by kiley   May 17, 2008


Five months gone by,
what a waste of time.
you said our love was true
but then i knew.
it was all a lie.

Five months of falling,
five months of loving.
ripped apart,
washed away in the ocean
toward the sunset.

Tears fall like leaves on a smooth surface in air.
Thinking of what we would have been.
Thinking if you ever really cared.

Five months of happiness,
five months of joyful tears.
being all fake, nothing new, nothing true.

Broken hearted,
shattered on the floor,
as the boy walks out the door.
Five months, oh what a waste of time.

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  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Its a good poem loves... man right now i am feeling like this but it wasnt exactly 5 months for me just a day of getting hurt by a friend. bleh good poem though

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    This is a really pretty poem :] I liked it, Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    "as the boy walks out the door." <- pretty much sums it up. I love this line. It fit well.

    Well written. It came across as angry, sad, and relieved at the same time.

  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    This is one of my faves of your poems really good!