Comments : Five Months

  • 16 years ago

    by ViolentlyDisturbed

    This is one of my faves of your poems really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    "as the boy walks out the door." <- pretty much sums it up. I love this line. It fit well.

    Well written. It came across as angry, sad, and relieved at the same time.

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    This is a really pretty poem :] I liked it, Good Job

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Its a good poem loves... man right now i am feeling like this but it wasnt exactly 5 months for me just a day of getting hurt by a friend. bleh good poem though