This poem reminds me about my self and what i went throgh

You would be an intersting person to have a conversation with...

i like your vocabulary here...it is really nice...

yet...(back to formal aspects once again )
you should think of capitalizing the letters... and also check your mistakes before you submit because it distracts a bit...

for a reason which i cannot understand, i read your poem and thought of "hope is a thing with feathers"...

I mean, hope brings us back on the road...
in portuguese we say " a esperanca e a ultima a morrer" ~ "the hope is the last one to die" (some of the depth get's lost in the translation...but i think you'd know what i mean...)

for another reason which i also cannot understand, this website won't let me write the author of the quote your poem reminded me of...

i just got it after deleting half the comment because of "unappropriate words(?"), asking myself what had i done wrong...(so that's why this is splitted up... ^^)

5/5
*isabel*