I accidently clicked on ur poem from somewhere and even though i don't quite like poems about this type of subject, i just had to let u know that ur poem was very well written and flowed very well. the images of the devil always being there when you're doing those kinds of things are created well. good job

This poem totally rocks!! i love it and wouldnt mind meeting the devil in ur poem lol!!!

This poem was so sensual so lustful. I loved it honestly and truely another great read of yours. It was so intense. i've added it as one of my favorites. keep writing. 5/5

Not much a fan of this kind of poems, yet the title drew me in...
i love the imagery in here, it is wonderful...
the repetition also fits quite well in here, it helps the rhythm...

the poem itself is very intense... ^^

5/5

*isabel*