Comments : As we grow Older

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "Were more alone
    Loosing nights
    As we get older
    Were loosing fights"

    ^Loosing should be losing.....

    "Bleeding from scars
    Blinded by tears
    Stunned by love
    Screaming from fears"

    ^Great flow there, and you rhyme was absolutely perfect. Love the way you wrote it!

    "So hold on to the preset"

    ^perset should be present........

    Overall, well done. I loved every line, and except for those spelling errors, you did beauitfully. Your poems always have such meaning and are so enjoyable to read.